I have shown my opening sequence to many people where many people have liked my opening sequence. They even liked the concept of a real fun game that a person would play with your friend can be portrayed so negatively where the game traps you and people die in the process of getting out.
Some people did comment on the scene where the three characters entered the three doors, saying that it was an odd scene as for having three people entering separate doors together looks artificial and not realistic. I would have to add an additional scene to show that they meet and chat and then enter the door, this would cause my opening sequence to g over 2 minutes. So i changed that scene completely by having their images on their doors rather than showing them enter the door.
The above critic mentioned was surely helpful as i was also unsure about the scene and the audience giving an honest review helped me to improve my opening sequence.
Some people did comment on the scene where the three characters entered the three doors, saying that it was an odd scene as for having three people entering separate doors together looks artificial and not realistic. I would have to add an additional scene to show that they meet and chat and then enter the door, this would cause my opening sequence to g over 2 minutes. So i changed that scene completely by having their images on their doors rather than showing them enter the door.
The above critic mentioned was surely helpful as i was also unsure about the scene and the audience giving an honest review helped me to improve my opening sequence.
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