Noticed changes

There were a lot of changes that i noticed when watching my opening sequence a lot of times and i also took feed back from a person who acts in featured film and also is a director himself. In the start there is a scene where a girl, Olivia is jogging on the jogging tracks. The scene is shot in the evening so it dark and there were yellow dim light switched on on the light poles which couldn't be turned off as i was shooting in a building. Due to the yellow light the scene looks very grainy and noisy and and a bit blurred. There is one more scene in which the camera de-focused from the main character. There is one more light issue which i noticed in the scenes with the red light setting. The light is very harsh as you can see the light spot on the brown colored wooden doors which also looks bad and also the camera i a bit tilted.