Opening scene changed

In my opening sequence the story is the same but the only difference is that in my original plan there were four characters but now there are three characters. The reason behind doing this is that i couldnt get permission to shoot in a supermarket. I did go to many supermarket to ask if i could shoot but they declined the request as i had to take permission from the store company which would take a lot time. Also i wanted to add a scene where there are these doors from which you can hear banging and screaming sounds to create more drama  The supermarket scene was where the character Carlos was a worker and was arranging products on the racks. Instead of this scene i have added three more scenes that add a bit more drama to the opening sequence.

My three additional:

• The first scene is where all the three characters are shown entering the three doors with a red tinted light to create a mood of danger. 

• The first scene i followed with a scene where the three doors are shown where the screaming and banging sounds are heard.

• It ends with a person striking cross on the pictures of the three characters which are pinned with tiny blades.